Its gonna be interesting when the other one comes home.
Except she's not coming back. She stole all their money and with him replacing her the dad can't just tell the cops she did it!
Interesting twist, I liked the way his personality shifts during the conversation from calling his dad, "Dad" to calling him by his first name. Subtle, but powerful personality shift.CheersZapper
Thanks. Stream of consciousness is very effective!
Its gonna be interesting when the other one comes home.
ReplyDeleteExcept she's not coming back. She stole all their money and with him replacing her the dad can't just tell the cops she did it!
DeleteInteresting twist, I liked the way his personality shifts during the conversation from calling his dad, "Dad" to calling him by his first name. Subtle, but powerful personality shift.
ReplyDeleteCheers
Zapper
Thanks. Stream of consciousness is very effective!
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