Dear Readers,
I normally don't add text like this, but you'll notice this was a "Part 1". I had trouble deciding on a body for part 2 and more bodies for the rest, and since I just did "Level Up 3" a big multi-body series seems a bit redundant. If you want more of this though please post a comment to let me know.
i dont mind the text, especialy since it is a part 1 and the backstory needs to be addressed. It's not needed everytime, but if it is needed for the sake of the story, I dont mind
ReplyDeleteI meant the text as part of the post...the capped pics always have text...
DeleteActually, I really like the text...as you are a good storyteller with a great eye for integrating story and image. This was an interesting plot device...and I would hope to see more. Thank you for the read Gensabi
ReplyDeleteThanks...what I meant as text was the little message in the post.
DeleteI liked it...interesting story. I would like to see more.
ReplyDeleteThanks. Just now seeing these comments!
DeleteI love this and would love to see more. Maybe he can't control who he sheds into? If not its a great story all the same. I'd love you to try to describe the shedding process in more detail too. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteThanks, and I might revisit this. It's just things have been funky lately.
DeleteI would like to see more about who the son becomes or more about him as his moms double
ReplyDeleteThanks, and I might be able to do that. Things have been funky lately though.
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